Forum: Story Time
02/20/2008, 12:55 AM
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Replies: 15
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I do like the story - it's very well written so...
I do like the story - it's very well written so far - though, to make it easier to read... maybe consider splitting up the dialogue a bit, rather than just one big chunk of it?
As far as the story...
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