Anyone want to readover my story before I post it

[Dru]

Anyone want to proof read a story for me. I have never written one and just sat down and typed one up this evening and was hoping someone with a little bit of writing epxeriince might give it a read and make suggestions if needed. Its definity raded XXX. its about a male to female sissy on her birthday and her Daddy is helping her celebrate her birthday.

Thank you. I want it to be good because I want to enter it in story contest.

[Kalisto]

I'd be willing to give it a look. :)

[moriadne]

Anyone want to proof read a story for me. I have never written one and just sat down and typed one up this evening and was hoping someone with a little bit of writing epxeriince might give it a read and make suggestions if needed. Its definity raded XXX. its about a male to female sissy on her birthday and her Daddy is helping her celebrate her birthday.

Thank you. I want it to be good because I want to enter it in story contest.

I"m looking for an editor too. How about 'I'll show you mine if you show me yours?'